Feedback.

Within small groups we presented our work over the summer and received feedback on the strengths and areas of improvements for both presentation skills and the visual products.

Strengths

• Great illustrations 
• Final products work really well for audience 
• Good that looked at broad and final idea from all research
• Fun topic 
• Thought it through very well before going into another topic
• Illustration are amazing 
• Character design is fun and unique 
• Good illustrations, very comical for kids 
• Nice fold out poster of characters with information of the character on the other side
• Great to see the process and journey of the research
• Large amount in-depth research interested with subject matter 
• Took images and illustrated in your own way 

Areas of improvements 

• Possibly include more history 
• Include a little more info/facts within products depending on how much info is available 
• Go bigger, go wild with the size and range 
• Experiment with stock 
• Grammar and proof read work before printing and finalising 

This was a great way to get back into the year and has given me a number of things to consider and take forward into the new modules. Areas of improvements such as experimenting with scale and stock are something that I really need to keep remembering moving forward as it can be applied to any brief and is a quick and easy consideration that could change the overall finish of my design massively. Although grammar and proof reading is an obvious suggestion it is something that I often forget or leave too late to sort out and fix, as my practice is stepping up a level now I'm in the second year this is essential to achieve more professionalism and higher quality. All something to consider moving forward.